Thursday, January 12, 2012

flawless:emily


My character Emily from my book flawless is facing tons of trouble. She thinks Maya and she can be but that’s not her. She is using Toby as like a blockade and she doesn't want to bring out the real her which is what Alison new and always blackmailed her with. Yet today a is still blackmailing her "don't you like that cherry Chap Stick -A" I feel she is the weakest link right know and a can see that. A is torching her knowingly Emily is in that stage where you don't even know who you as your self are. I feel however much Emily tries to blockade her feelings but, I feel Maya can do something and just bring it out.  She is not showing who she really is. I feel really bad for Toby everyone thinks that he is I just think Toby is the kid that was in the wrong place at the wrong time. He seems rally hurt for someone that did nothing doesn’t know I will like to continue and see what happens next.this book is going great so far it keeps me into the book.

3 comments:

  1. I really like your entry, because I read the first book, and watch the television series. I think it is interesting to see how all three of them compare. I think you did a good job at interpreting how the characters feel for example Toby.

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  2. i like how you put in how the characters felt and what the book is about. i reallly liked it!!!

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  3. I really like this, you expressed your feelings about what happening in the book and you did it well

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