Sunday, April 15, 2012

His Life’s a Circus

       In this article they talk about how life is growing up in circus just like Alexander lacey. He say it tons of fun but also comes with a pound of work. The purpose of this article is main purpose is to talk about lacey and his life in the zoo.
     lacey was a circus child and loved the circus ''he described his childhood as brilliant" he said at first he didn't want to be a part of the circus once he grew up but then he couldn't let go his love for his circus.
     In the article they also talk about how wild cats can be difficult to understand and hard to work with but then lacey grew up with these cats so they had become close to lacey. This article also talks about how dangerous and how you have to be alert all the time when working with these wild cats it is important .he say you have to let the animals do what they want without force you have to be nice and easy with them.“It’s very important that they only do what they feel most comfortable with in the ring,” lacey states they are not just put into cages their cage are more like bedrooms with water and food. These animals are not mistreated. 
     In conclusion this animal should not be mistreated but loved by all. These animals love their job and love working with lacey. Lacey also enjoys his job .this job require patience trust from both side and this is a job both sides love.

Sunday, April 8, 2012

vacation homework#2

The student plagiarized the student just copied and pastes and didn't source it he/she just copied and pasted it and said that he/she wrote it.if s/he liked it so much she could have at least quoted it and explained.For example" There is a peaceful essence flowing from the structures. Perhaps the cool dark colors and the fiery windows spark memories of our own warm childhood years filled with imagination of what exists in the night and dark starry skies. The center point of the town is the tall steeple of the church, reigning largely over the smaller buildings. This steeple casts down a sense of stability onto the town, and also creates a sense of size and seclusion." A Brief Understanding of the Starry Night Paintings, unknown author.
then later at the end go on easy bib and source the articles/he found this. 3 ways to avoid this is to after you do read some information wait about 5-10 minutes weather it may be listening to music or whatever sit down and writ. another way is after you are done writing go back and make sure you aren't copying.another thing you can do is read multiple sources and and wait and then write so it your own words from many different sources so that you don't accidentally do anything.

vacation homework #1


My two favorite blog post had to Joyce’s on The Hunger Games were she compares both Gale and Peeta. I also enjoyed reading Ali’s review on "Much Ado About Nothing" she did a really good job explaining about everything that brought the show together. When reading Joyce’s I saw that she did a good job without giving away what happens in the book she had a good balance of detail and explanation I thought I worked well. It was short and to the point and I think it worked well. In Ali’s blog post Ali does a good job explaining detail from detail in what brought the play together she really doesn’t talk about the plot but more the costumes the set design and I think she did that well. She did it well because she didn’t spoil it but she worked with it well.
            I think in the future I will try not to spoil the book because I seem to do that a lot like I give away the ending or what happens. So I will try not to give it away. I will also try to fix all my grammatical errors because I have lots of those. But the blogs up here will be y goal I’ll try to write like these great writers.