vacation homework #1

My two favorite blog post had to Joyce’s on The Hunger Games were she compares both Gale and Peeta. I also enjoyed reading Ali’s review on "Much Ado About Nothing" she did a really good job explaining about everything that brought the show together. When reading Joyce’s I saw that she did a good job without giving away what happens in the book she had a good balance of detail and explanation I thought I worked well. It was short and to the point and I think it worked well. In Ali’s blog post Ali does a good job explaining detail from detail in what brought the play together she really doesn’t talk about the plot but more the costumes the set design and I think she did that well. She did it well because she didn’t spoil it but she worked with it well.

            I think in the future I will try not to spoil the book because I seem to do that a lot like I give away the ending or what happens. So I will try not to give it away. I will also try to fix all my grammatical errors because I have lots of those. But the blogs up here will be y goal I’ll try to write like these great writers.